3rd Interlude, page 10

I was experimenting a bit on this page with a different type of pen, so let me know if you notice any difference. Or not.

The middle bubble in the last panel originally read, “I’d tell you ‘Jack, son of so-and-so’”; but it occurred to me that, if readers could accept the idea of a guy called “the Boy”, they might actually believe that his father was literally named “so-and-so”. Which would admittedly be kind of funny, but not quite what I had in mind.

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